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The Secrets of Writing Sales Copy That Converts

Written by: Chris McNeeney, Guest Author

In my years as a super affiliate, I have seen some of the best and worst that copywriting has to offer and almost everything in between. ClickBank is awash with sales letters and copy for vendor products and it’s not always obvious which ones will convert to sales at first glance.

Even the ugliest site will convert browsers into paying customers if the copy is well written and does its job as it should – and if the copywriter understands how to sell to the niche in question.

In this post, I am going to teach you the copywriting elements that are vital to the success of any sales page (no matter how good or bad the design and graphics). The end result should be that your customers feel they simply have to buy the product you’re offering, without delay.

The Key Element of Converting Browsers into Buyers

One of the most important elements to concentrate on when promoting your own or someone else’s product is your sales copy. The better your copy converts, the more products you will sell and the more you will attract affiliates to sell your product for you. It’s all a virtuous cycle – and arguably your sales copy is the most important factor in the entire mix; perhaps even more important than the product or the affiliates you recruit.

If you can write a great sales letter, one that converts into sales, then you will have other marketers ‘eating out of your hand’ in a bid to promote your ClickBank products. Get it wrong and you won’t get any traction in the ClickBank Marketplace, and your product will stagnate and die.

The starting point of writing killer sales copy is to understand your market. By that, I don’t mean reading a few articles and assuming you know the market. You really have to do a bit of leg-work to understand who you are talking to, establish what they want, and research what’s already out there and what isn’t.

Find a gap in the market and fill it. Visit forums and find out what people are talking about, what their frustrations are, and how likely they are to spend money to get a solution to their problem or need. Read your competitors’ sales letters and sign up to their e-mail newsletters. Listen to the problems they talk about that the average customer has (e.g., “Aren’t you sick of diet pills that don’t work?”), along with which benefits they push hardest (“Lose weight without hunger pangs”). This will highlight important clues as to what is on the mind of your target audience.

So do your research and work out what is going through their heads. In other words, you really need to resonate with your potential buyer. If you can do this you can establish empathy with your potential buyer. If you do this, you are well on your way to a winning formula for your sales copy.

Getting Started

Now, before you exclaim, ‘But I can’t write copy,’ know that it is actually easier than you think. In fact, the transition from never having written a word of copy to being a ‘monster’ copywriter is perfectly achievable in just days – but only if you follow and implement some simple but extremely powerful copywriting rules.

The Short Cut To Copywriting Success

One of the fastest ways to get yourself from 0 to 60 writing great sales copy is to leverage the years of experience of some of the great copywriters who have already tried, tested, and proven the elements of copywriting. In short, we are going to cheat a little by building up a big pile of other marketers’ copy and swiping it (a.k.a. “the cheat sheet”).

Note: before I proceed, I want to be very clear on something. I am not suggesting you break copyright rules by copying other people’s work – you simply cannot do that – it would be copyright infringement. But the good news is, we don’t need to. Instead, we can examine and discover the successful elements, phrases, hooks, and buzzwords that are being used, and spin them to work into our own copywriting. In other words, we are going to extract the most important elements and rework them into our own sales letters. This is not only lawful – but its common practice in successful copywriting circles. The trick is to go to other niches and take elements from the most successful sales letters there for your own inspiration.

For example, let’s say you want to write copy for a bodybuilding product. You might come across a Forex sales letter with a headline that reads:

“Just In: Renegade, Grass Roots Trader Exposes Forex Loophole and Siphons Off $3,000 In 30 Days.”

You have a lot of words you can work with and use here, such as renegade, grass roots, exposes, loophole, siphons, etc. So if your niche was bodybuilding, you could work those words into your own headline:

“ Renegade Bodybuilder exposes muscle-building loophole and packs on 8 lbs of muscle in 3 weeks.”

The idea is to take the words and adapt and fit them to your own copy, whilst keeping the same elements of newness (renegade), something uncovered (loophole, exposed) and, very importantly, how quickly something can be achieved (6 days / 3 weeks). This method should not only be used for your headline, but also for your sub headers and the body copy of your sales letter.

Benefits Are Vital

Why? Because it’s a proven fact that people will buy something based on its benefits. Benefits are simply what the customer gets out of buying a product – in short, they’re the reason that people decide to buy a certain product. For example, if you have a product on making money, people will buy because of the perceived benefits that making money will bring, such as being able to pay off debts, improve their lifestyle, and by doing so appear more attractive to people around them. If it’s a more advanced guide, benefits might be very specific – for example, if it’s a blogging guide, one benefit might be “generating a flood of backlinks to your blog.”

Also, there’s a deeper psychological aspect here. Whilst people think they just want to make more money, in truth the benefits they will gain from doing so are much deeper than it at first appears. So it’s not enough to just sell the ‘idea’ of making money – this is far too general and unfocused. Instead, you should sell the benefits that will have a knock-on effect as a result of making money. So the more you understand the deep reasons behind why people want something, the more likely you are going to be able to tap into a person’s psyche when writing sales copy.

Check Out What’s Working

The best place to start when researching what is and isn’t working in a given niche is to check out the top performing products in that niche. This is easily achieved by heading over to the ClickBank Marketplace and doing a keyword search in a given niche. Alternatively, you can check out affiliate niches or the top ClickBank products on my site, Affiliate X.

For example, let’s look at dating. We know that Internet dating is a huge market that continues to grow repidly, but what about digging deeper into the dating niche?

Doing a search in ClickBank on any aspect of dating will bring up the top performing products, which are easily identified by their high gravity score. Take a look at the headlines of the top performers. The headline is the most important part of the sales copy. If you don’t grab the reader’s attention at this point, you will have lost them forever. A headline should be compelling, intriguing, and raise curiosity so the reader wants to read on. In the same way, the sub header should pull the reader in with a taste of what’s to come.

Generally, a good formula for a headline is: “How [someone like the customer] [got the kind of benefit the customer wants] in [x days].” For example, “How a 27 year old renegade Forex trader made $1,000 with a breakthrough new robot in 10 days,” or “How a 21 year old scrawny kid stacked on 13 lbs of chest muscle in 31 days.”

Remember that empathy is a powerful copywriting tool. If you can identify with the reader and show that you understand their problem or need because you have been “in their shoes” yourself, that helps build trust. Explain your situation and how you worked to discover a solution, and now you want to share it so that others don’t have to go through the same hurdles and problems that you did.

Empathy in any situation is beneficial, but in copywriting it’s essential. For this very reason, your story (i.e., how you arrived at this point) should make up a major part of your copy. It’s important not to underestimate the value of empathy within your copy – get it right and your copy will result in insane conversions.

Don’t Ignore The Competition

When writing your copy, you may be tempted to ignore the competition and hope that potential buyers will see your product for what it is and just buy it. Don’t make this mistake. Instead, explain in your copy why your product is better because it covers an angle that isn’t covered in competing products.

Try to think of a unique selling point that makes your product different from the others out there. Maybe it’s a better value, easier to understand, quicker to implement, or has better proof. Whatever the unique selling point is, elaborate on it and make it stand out. Just put yourself in a reader’s shoes – if you wanted to buy a product on dating women or learning to play the guitar – would you just check out one product? No, of course not; you would check out what’s available from a selection and then choose the best one.

Which brings us nicely to…

The Power of Proof

The number one reason why people don’t buy a product is because they don’t believe its claims. How many times have you thought to yourself, “that sounds too easy” or “that sounds too good to be true?” This is why it’s so important to demonstrate empathy within your copy.

However, the second element that cannot be overlooked is proof that your products does what it says it does. If you can provide screenshots of profits you’ve attained using the product, or a live working example, or even testimonials from existing customers, then you are on to a winner. Once you have the proof, it will be easier for potential customers to identify themselves with the benefits your product will deliver and they will want it for themselves.

To Conclude

It’s important to understand that in order to write great copy that will convert into sales, you DON’T need to be an experienced copywriter. It’s as simple as breaking down the sales copy of highly converting web pages out there, and carefully working out why they are selling. That’s just something that comes with a little digging and a bit of experience.

It doesn’t matter what niche the sales copy is in. You can swipe the buzz words and curiosity elements within the headlines, sub headers and sales letter body and rework those to your suit your own niche. Well thought-out copy and strong proof will almost guarantee your sales pitch will convert into sales. Once you have mastered these essential elements, you’ll be able to create copy that converts in any niche you choose.

About the Author

Chris McNeeney is the owner of Affiliate X – a resource for ClickBank affiliates with affiliate tools, affiliate videos, and training information.

About

Beau is the Client Knowledge Guru for ClickBank and covers the latest trends, tips and techniques for building profitable Internet marketing businesses.

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36 Responses to “The Secrets of Writing Sales Copy That Converts”

  • Gold says:

    I think that I’d rather hear from someone who actually parts with money for what is bought then someones opinion as to what sells.

  • Beau Blackwell, ClickBank says:

    Gold,

    While it might seem like a good idea to ask people why they bought something, a lot of the motivation behind why people buy is subconscious. They probably couldn’t tell you the “real” reason they bought, even if they wanted to. What makes successful vendors so good at converting shoppers into buyers is that after research and testing, they’re able to really understand what actually motivates people to buy, and tailor their sales copy to make sure shoppers understand why the product will meet their needs.

  • Thank you for such great information I foung this very useful.

  • Manoj Kumar says:

    Thanks for this article. Being a developer myself, I’m trying to write copies that may help sell my tools. Kudos to your article.

  • Mark Aylward says:

    Chris
    Your timing was perfect. I am sitting here having just grabbed a domain name and WP theme and am thinking about the sales copy for my first affiliate site!
    Now I can just print this out and plug in my specifics
    Thanks
    Mark

  • This is great information, written clearly. Thanks for sharing this.

  • Oliver Olsen says:

    There are over 20 different sales triggers you can use in a sales letter. These triggers are thousands of years old because they are things that we react to because we are human! Things like reciprocity, scarcity, the common enemy, novelty, anticipation, intimacy, proof, credibility to name a few. They always have worked, they always will. When don’t they work? a) when your prospect sees you pulling the trigger. i.e. they see that you are saying something that your competitor said in exactly the same way and b) when you pull the trigger too hard and lose their trust. Doing that can kill a whole campaign.

    Lesson? Be original. Be genuine. Never lose the trust you have and always be building the trust. Remember, once the trust is gone, it never comes back.

  • Jaspreet says:

    Good one,

    I have also recently entered into affiliate marketing and am also finding it interesting and confusing at the same time. Rather I m seeing that alot of things need to be learnt…

    Thank you for this article

  • Yamato says:

    Great article – thanks.
    I like how you converted the headline from one niche to an other.
    The importance of headlines cannot be talked about enough. They and the subheadlines and the first paragraphs should draw you deep into the content of your salesletter, so that every element that you read makes you hunger for the next one. Difficult to accomplish for beginners, but lots of practice will produce good results.

  • Beau Blackwell, ClickBank says:

    Oliver,

    Great points! You’re absolutely right about sales triggers, and it’s very interesting that despite all of the changes in technology and delivery, sales principles that were written about 80 years ago (and earlier) work just as well today.

  • WIAB says:

    Good stuff to learning this basics. More people forget to implement this work with yours sales copy and finally get worried about why this site is not receive so much conversions. Thanks for your explanation.

  • YNE says:

    In order to survive and achieve success in this market, one must be prepared to perform and optimize the best posible your sales letter. One must be willing to learn and adapt to new strategies that is required to have the best conversion to achieve the great results from visitors.

  • Carol McCrow says:

    Great information; it makes a lot of sense and are some valuable tips for me…. Also appreciated the comment Oliver Olsen added about keeping the honesty intact because that is so important!

  • Poppie says:

    I think the emotions created and then used as triggers by true sales people…(and they have been around since the beginning of time) are probably necessary to our existence!

    Think about it…if we didn’t respond to the evocative sales copy, we wouldn’t try/buy all the new things coming along.

    I think the sales process is a natural occurrence in humans, so we can aspire to higher and higher ideals.

    Charging or paying money for these goodies is what frightens some people, as they haven’t yet learned the importance of the exchange rate…human endeavor exchanged for something of equal value!

    Simple, really.

    I love reading good copy and noting how, where and when it grabs me!
    I never feel “conned or preyed upon”, as I know this exchange is banter, (my option always to turn away)and I embrace the opening of my mind to new things and ideas.

    So, I may buy stuff in an emotional reaction, but then tell me…who has not got a closest full of stuff they’ve bought on impulse over the years…especially tourists on cruise trips, who buy the grass skirts and coconut bra tops!

    Totally useless to them…but ahhh…the thrill of the purchase.

    It’s ALL about creating an experience for the buyer, hopefully a great one!

    Kindest,
    Poppie

  • Zach says:

    Excellent article. Writing good sales copy can seem like a very overwhelming task, but its important to stick to the couple simple guidelines and techniques you mention. Thanks.

  • Gavin Embry says:

    The whole point is on the pages of the Website above.

  • Samuel says:

    The article is excellent, thank you for helping me to understand the sistem.

  • Mano says:

    Thank you for sharing those great tips.
    You made it clear. I think the only way to improve is just to do it regularly.
    Thank you again

  • ken says:

    Thank You for refreshing my mind with an easy to read

    and easy to follow starting point. I can see that some of the peeps just don’t

    appreciate such solid information, that’s always mind blowing to me.

    Thank You, I feel great about my ability to write some killer copy NOW.

    Ken

  • Francisco says:

    Good article. But it only addresses one of the two important issues for a successful site. The other one is traffic. With out traffic, your site is worthless even if you have the best written sales letter.

  • I’ve found that the best way to write great detailed ad-copy is to compile lots of small ads into one large sales letter. We usually put our best condensed thoughts and best benefits into small classifieds, right? So after you have a dozen or more great classifieds, compile them into a fantastic sales piece! It really works!!!

  • Sven Cooke says:

    Beau thanks for the good article. I agree with others who have commented that traffic is key. Without it your site has no real value even if you have the best written sales letter. With both you will be successful.

  • Matthew Lord says:

    Great article Chris. Affiliate marketing is all about the copy, and yet many affiliates do not take the time to focus on proper copywriting techniques.

  • Robert Samss says:

    Awesome content and fantastic advice! Thank you for the tips that are not only beyond common sense but extremely useful. Every point is valid and MUST be considered when writing any article that contains real value. Very much appreciated!

  • carlos says:

    good article, very informative..
    but hell, i think i will stick to paying someone else to write my articles and sales copy’s.
    why spend hours of time thinking what to write and then getting writers block, let a pro do it and i can go play golf :O)

  • Sumu says:

    Thankssss. I’ve never read this kind of valuable and informative article on the web. Thanks for sharing, do hope more in coming days.

  • Frank says:

    I’m just getting into affiliate marketing and gathering information. This article is very enlightening and I am bookmarking the page. Thank you

  • I talked to an insurance guy about benefits. He looked at me like I’ve just landed from Mars. Because how can I even ask what the benefits were. Everybody knows. You get in a car accident, you have insurance, the insurance pays for the repairs.

    Took a while to get him to see that listing the benefits, even if he thinks everyone knows them, helps. Because it gives him a chance to differentiate himself from the competition. Everyone knows the benefits of having car insurance. But only he and a handful of people know the benefits of having insurance through his outfit. He does a few things differently than other agencies. A couple of them quite well.

    Then, when we put the benefits in the contest of what they mean to his target audience, it made even more sense.

    But it was hard, at first, to get him to go beyond the obvious. It was hard to get him to use the obvious to his advantage.

    Like Mr. Blackwell says, benefits used in relation to what your competitors are doing (or not doing) can be very powerful.

  • guy nadeau says:

    I`m relatively new to this Internet Marketing Business and I really enjoy all your articles so far. Really informative.

  • TechPry says:

    Great article Chris. Thank you for sharing those great tips. Good stuff to learning this basics.

  • Joseph says:

    I’ve been working on trying to write some copy for my web-sites and it is really hard to write good copy when at the same time I’m trying to write for google as well. but I am going to try to re-work my stuff and use some of your advice.

  • Marquespc says:

    Hello…I’m new here…so I’m a litlle confuse with all this…if anyone can help me i apreciate…I’m promotin products ans I copy and paste the link in facebook and in Hi5 pages, only…now what i have to do now?

    Can anyone please give me a little help?
    I began with Clickbank in Thursday…so I’m a baby in this kind of stuff…and it’s the first time that I’m doing something like this…so I need a litlle help here…

    Thank you all

  • Tammara says:

    Stressing benefits is vital! Your buying customers are looking for a solution to a problem they have. They really want to read “What’s In It For Me”, not about you (the site creator). I proof my copy over and over for typos and try to delete the words “I, me, or we” and replace with “you” as much as possible!

  • Arlie Jarels says:

    Your headline formula is very popular. I see this kind of thing used a lot but I think some sites go over the top with their claims and that people are getting wary of this. One must write headlines that are compelling but still believable. I promote many Clickbank products and unfortunately, I find the word “scam” comes up in some of the most popular keyword searches. Making unrealistic claims contributes to this suspicion from potential customers.

  • Nona Soshnik says:

    Love it! Some great tips there, Eric, and very nicely written. I absolutely agree with no.1. “You” is integral. And not just to avoid “we” (although that’s as important as you say), but also cos it’s a friendly, engaging approach. Too many clients still want copywriters not to use “you”.

  • shafaric says:

    Wow … Great articles. Help me a lot on understanding the techniques very well. Thanks

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